Saturday, May 15, 2010

Note To Self

  1. Don't write long passive passages.
  2. Find some action.
  3. Give up background information in conversations (just don't drag them out!)
So, do I have Colonel Obrie Lorcan, Acting Commander of the Hawkkur Legion and Loke Tashinga, Acting Supervising Manager, tell Sollar (and the readers) what happened after he left with Morgan?
Hmmm....
at

No comments:

Post a Comment

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)

It's all in my head!

Hi there friends and readers of the DragonHawk Saga! It's Friday and I am happy to report I have resolved some of the major problems I...

  • Just Who Are The Star Traders?
    There are five major Star Trader Families and one major group of Independents. The Blom and Tolen Families are primarily located on the Gaa...
  • It's all in my head!
    Hi there friends and readers of the DragonHawk Saga! It's Friday and I am happy to report I have resolved some of the major problems I...
  • Dragon Hunters Draws to a Close...
    Well, it's been a very productive couple of weekends. After a lot of long weekends and nights of writing, Dragon Hunters is finished. ...