I am working on a very important scene right now. Its about two ladies having tea.
No, you read that right. I said two ladies having tea.
These two ladies by the way, Lady Mani Hawkes, wife of the StarHawke Tycho, and Mistress Annie Tolen of the Tolen Family Star Traders, just happen to be powerful DragonHawks in their own right.
They met at a reception hosted by Annie Tolen for the announcement of the new Tolen & Blom starship servicing and repair facility on Conborine, in the OutWorlds. Both know, thanks to their Dragons Within, that the other are DragonHawks. And while Mani Hawkes is a Drakkon Tycho DragonHawk, the most powerful of all the DragonHawks, Annie Tolen is not afraid.
And that is why Mani Hawkes is so taken by her. She would be the perfect mate for her son, Elias, a headstrong Drakkon Tycho DragonHawk who needs someone to reign him in. But how does she arrange it, without making it looked arranged? Especially with so much attention on the Tycho Star Traders these days?
What we need now, is some sort of incident to throw them altogether.
Hmm, back to the story...
Thanks for reading!
Dave
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