Monday, November 19, 2012

A bit from Dragon Hunters

Here's a bit from Dragon Hunters, a hint of the events in the first three books:


Annie Tolen felt herself slipping from reality as her mind drifted aimlessly in a dark void, losing track of time, drifting along in the endless darkness for what seemed forever.

After a time, she looked down on an ancient room filled with armed warriors in battle armor. It is a large room with tall walls hewn from rock. A man is standing on a large rock at the front of the room, addressing the soldiers. Something tells her she should recognize this place, but her mind is confused with everything that is happening to her. She concentrates on the man – the obvious leader of these warriors – but she cannot understand what he is saying. Her dream drifts closer until she recognizes Elias Hawkes. As he turns to look in her direction, the Hawkkur Warriors – for that is who they are – begin chanting a single word over and over: Drakkon!  Drakkon!  Drakkon!  Drakkon!

The massive room quickly fades from her vision and she finds herself back in the black, endless void. She calls out to her Dragon Within, but Capella is nowhere to be found. She begins to panic, wondering what has happened to her Dragon Within as another vision forms in her mind.

The scene is a huge wedding, held in a massive chamber filled with hundreds of Star Traders in attendance. As her vision slowly floats towards the bride and groom, she can only see their backs as they stand before the official conducting the ceremony. The bride is dressed in a beautiful white gown with voluminous skirts and a long train, both trimmed in green and gold while the groom is dressed in a formal forest green uniform of the Hawkkur Legion. As the ceremony concludes and the bride and groom turn towards the crowd, she is shocked to see that she is the bride and Elias Hawkes is the groom!

Before she can recover from the shock of seeing her own wedding, she is thrust back into the void. She welcomes the black as she wonders what is happening to her. Is this just a dream? Or is she truly seeing the future?

Without warning, another vision forms. Annie finds herself floating, rather speeding, alongside a powerful starship traveling through Transit Space, a warship bristling with weapons. She moves closer to the warship and suddenly she is inside moving along a wide passage filled with jubilent spacers in the uniforms of the Tycho Star Traders and the Hawkkur Legion. Her vision continues to move through the starship until it comes to a wide door guarded by more Hawkkur warriors. She moves through the door and into the room where a group of people are gathered around a large bed.

No! No! No! She screams as her vision self approaches the huge bed.

Annie Tolen stares at her dream self laying in the bed, holding a tiny infant boy wrapped in a shiny blue blanket that bears the Hawk and Star of the StarHawke Tycho. Two young girls, about eleven and nine are sitting on either side of the bed smiling as  they watch the baby boy. Elias Hawkes, wearing the uniform of the StarHawke Tycho, kneals beside her bed. There are others in the room as well, a mixture of men and women in the livery of the Tycho Star Traders and the Hawkkur Legion, offering their congratulations.

The StarHawke Tycho reaches over to touch the boy, his eyes filled with love for his son. As his hand gently grasps the boy’s there is a surge of Dragon Magic that races out into the room and throughout the starship until it is felt by everyone onboard. As the surge fades, those assembled around the boy hear the unmistakeable growl of his Dragon Within. Awestruck by what they have felt and heard, the assembled officers kneal before the StarHawke Tycho and his family. Throughout the starship, the chant begins and is repeated over and over: Drakkon!  Drakkon!  Drakkon!  Drakkon!

Thanks for reading!

Dave

Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Major Changes? Hmm...

I've been thinking of ways to salvage all of the work that I've invested in the whole saga, not just the original story. I think I have found a way that makes a lot of sense. And it could be a lot of fun.

Wait a minute... You think I'm going to tell you here? Right now?

Where's the fun in that?

Oh, I'll give you some hints later on, but not now. Gotta work out the details first...

What I can say is that the DragonHawk Saga will continue as planned through the first five books:
  • Dragon Hunters
  • Dragon Heart
  • Dragon Betrayal
  • Dragon Revenge
  • Dragon Summer
The major change will start at the end of Dragon Summer and the start of book six, Dragon Return.

I know this doesn't make a lot of sense to anyone but me, but...

This is the part where I go against convention and do what I want to do...

Thanks for reading!

Dave

Sunday, November 4, 2012

More Thoughs About Dragon Summer

So, if you are writing a series, can the Protagonist change from story to story?

If the DragonHawk Saga is about the Return of the Great Dragon, is the Great Dragon the only Protagonist allowed?

What about the people responsible for the Great Dragon's return?

What about his family and the trials and tribulations they go through to make it possible for the Return of the Great Dragon to occur?

Does all of this "stuff" get relegated to back story?

What if the Protagonist is an idea? A belief in a better future?

Who or what is the ruling authority on this sort of thing? Or is this based on some sort of writing school, writing industry conventional wisdom?

Why can't my readers experience the struggles, dreams, and failures of previous generations as they battle against all sorts of evil in the quest for the Return of the Great Dragon?

Does that mean I will never be published? That I will never be a successful writer because I didn't play by the rules?

I don' know the answer to these questions. I know what the conventional wisdom is. But I don't believe I have to comply with the conventional wisdom.


Thanks for reading!

Dave

Having that Dragon Summer Thing...

Dragon Summer has always been one of my favorite parts of the DragonHawk Saga. It is the original start of the entire saga, the story of an orphan boy determined to find his family. Everything else you have read about here on my blog orignated from that idea.

Dragon Summer grew as Morgan returned to the Star Trader Galaxy to attend the Star Trader School and reclaim his place as the leader of the Tycho Star Traders - the StarHawke Tycho.

Then I met some other writers and had the opportunity to participate in their summer version of the annual National Novel Writing Month, NaNoWriMo. This group celebrated the event in the summer, during the month of July, so that their kids - really talented kids - could participate.

Tycho Station was born that first summer. Dragon Hunters, and Dragon Heart also grew out of those summer events. As I wrote these stories, I began to ask where these stories were leading and how would I bring them to some sort of conclusion.

That's brought us to today, where I have returned to the original story Gateway Station. I started editing and updating the story to comply wth the existing rules and story versions.

The purpose of all of this rewrite? That's complicated...

In the meantime, read an exercept from Gateway Station on the ne Gateway Station page!

Thanks for reading!

Dave

It's all in my head!

Hi there friends and readers of the DragonHawk Saga! It's Friday and I am happy to report I have resolved some of the major problems I...