When I am in writing mode, just trying to get my thoughts out of my head and onto the screen, I have a tendency to abuse the words "and", "but", and "that".
So I aw rewriting Tycho Station in the "Campaign Against And, But and That".
There's a lot of extra words between those ands, buts, and thats. Some of them are useful, most of them are extraneous. So I am cleaning them up as well. Rewriting passages to make them more descriptive with fewer words.
Simplifying descriptions, making them more descriptive. (I hope)
Tonight so far, I have deleted 1, 545 words and five more pages!
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