I like this line:
The natural power of the most powerful of the
DragonHawk Bloodlines had almost overwhelmed her as the old legends and stories
of her childhood came crashing down as she realized the most powerful of the DragonHawks,
the Tycho Drakkon, ruled the Tycho Star Traders and their legendary warriors,
the Hawkkur Legion.
What do you think?
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